Michael’s is look real nice, but it’s maybe starting to feel a bit southwestern-y. I don’t know if Tex-Mex is on the menu, but the piece is still mui caliente.

I like Dan’s. Form is nice and overall the structure feels sound. I might want some personal attachment to the phrase considering a discussion from our course about the usage of those words in Arabic day to day life. Hopefully I’m not speaking out of turn!

Strange to me, but Tousue’s is feeling the most on point, especially with what I have been seeing on Khatt network. I think it needs that pop of color though, nothing major, but something that hammers home the well formed Arabic sensibilities with the Dutch-esque vibe of the overall piece. Maybe the English translation becomes red or orange. The understated nature is working, but could just need that little push over the edge.

Josh’s too is feeling just about right, I think it’s the vector form / shape that I think could be pushed more. I think it be as simple as having some of the rounded forms overlap the type / “+” signs in (similar to how the “+” interact with the type) to make a more complex form overall.

Great great great directions though! These things are looking SUPER sick. Can’t wait to see more.