Wonderful stuff, the background forms in both designs remind you of over-sized projections of portions of the Persian text, yet the first one also reminds you of a city skyline or perhaps a subway map, depending on where you look; the bottom one looks like waves crashing against cliffs or a headland. Both simple and anything but simple, quite appealing.
I like the use of the elements from the script, it reminds me of the work in the Seattle-Tehran Poster Show: http://virtualsound.vox.com/library/post/seattle-tehran-poster-show.html

I’m impressed and inspired from the first image. I will be greatful for the translation of the text within.